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Gascon martine's avatar

Magnifique démonstration, j'en suis baba!!!

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V.A. Harmon's avatar

Thank you for talking about dialogue between people who share pronouns! I've been having a difficult time striking the balance between overuse of my character's names and casual use with both names and pronouns in both dialogue and exposition. With exposition, is it only a matter of making actions/thoughts clear and easy to follow?

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Luke Jennings's avatar

It certainly helps, yes! But watch out for big blocks of exposition. Always good to break it up if possible

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