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A cheap move by Balice to show the pic but also shows how little she knows Eve. Get this feeling it’s not gonna end well for Balice, think death is too easy…thinking she gets setup by both E & V, & is left as the scapegoat by Mi6 with no job & no dignity left.

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Great installment Luke! Love how Villanelle treats Balice. She should have slapped her rather than being slapped. Villanelle should have thrown her into the water. I love this. It's difficult to wait for your next installment. If this were in the form of a book, which I am really looking forward to owning, I would be reading intensely and pouring through the pages. I love that last sentence how Villanelle is lovingly crediting Eve for getting one up on Balice. Love, love it, love it! Can't wait Luke! Thank you so much! 😊❤️

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This is going to be such a long week!

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Wonderful! I was surprised that Villanelle didn't react to the slap, but I'd like to think her brain was already processing what she had seen and her spidey sense was putting it all together. A truly exciting end of chapter - A page turner. Thanks Luke.

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Oh god….. my heart stopped for a moment than Villanelle clearly got a some kind of coded message from Eve? Or something else . I’m so excited 😆! I can’t stand Balice 🤢, like seriously she is so desperate & needy for Villanelle she will never be Eve 😂. Thank you Luke the mastermind 💯❤️🔥🎢 I kept checking thinking something was wrong with my Substack 😂 so so looking forward to the next chapter…… This just gets even more excited

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I love the way you're embracing digital media to publish this. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next!

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Ooooooh I'm intrigued! 🤔🤔🤔

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So intriguing, so glad you are writing these and sharing on Substack!

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Great chapter :D

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Absolutely loved the plot twist at the end. Can’t wait to hear what Eve’s been up to all this time. Got a feeling she’s going to show up when it really counts. Totally enjoyed this week’s installment. Thank you!

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Merci Luke pour ce nouveau chapitre. J'avoue que j'ai un peu de mal à suivre tous ces personnages qui font partie du groupe et pour lesquels je n'ai pas beaucoup d'intérêt(pour l'instant !). Balice n'est décidément pas très intelligente je trouve. J'ai hâte de savoir ce que V à découvert dans cette photo!!

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Shortest and sweetest chapter yet. Brilliant, Luke!

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Love 17. I can see the jasmine and rose fields. Can’t wait to hear what Eve has done that excites Villanelle.

Must be a secret message! Next chapter

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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..(takes deep breath)eeeeeeeeeeeeeeve!!! Eve is baaaack I knew it f*** YEAAAAH I feel like I'm at a (insert sports ball) game and the VIP veteran player has just been subbed in and I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT THEY'RE GUNNA PULL OFF!!

Also, this chapter was hilarious, just amazing banter, perfect, died laughing

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Leave it to Eve to get Villanelle to lose her shit in front of everyone. Now V can act up without any suspicious eyes cast her way. Plus she got a monster size bottle of Chanel #5.

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I love it ❤️ And I just bought all the 3 books and devoured them in 2 days. On track ❤️

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