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I love how everything is unfolding! I can't wait to find out more about this Johnny guy!

My heart adores Villanelle and all her flaws!🩷

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The storyline is so engaging, that it is agony to read it in 10-minute snippets! Looking forward to the next one already. Thank you!

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Besides of course the character dynamics, the descriptions, the setting of scenes, is just so physical, so sensual, so precise. Just love all the context-setting. Such great writing Luke.

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Ok….. Villanelle will clearly manipulate Balice into caving in for her & I don’t think it would take much as you can clearly see jealousy written all over Balice , but does Villanelle really want to go there with her? 😬🤦‍♀️ clearly Balice wouldn’t be replacing Eve? And if anything was to happen it wouldn’t mean anything to Villanelle. She clearly is hurting over Eve & just like I have said before hell hath no fury like a woman scorned 😬 god help everyone when it comes to Villanelle, she is so clever & just waiting to pounce 💥. She picked up on Johnny straight away, 🤔 have mi6 got a whole team involved. Thanks Luke the mastermind love this adventure 👏👏👏💯🔥🎢 looking forward to the next chapter. Ps I really don’t like Balice 😂 but am aware a story always needs one

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Thanks Pru, and of course you're right: hell hath no fury...

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Thank you Luke for your amazing story 😊

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I love how Villanelle is so much smarter than everyone else. She is so far ahead of the rest of them. I really don't like Balice. Villanelle is definitely missing Eve. She is hurt and cannot help but think about her. I hope Villanelle stays true to Eve and doesn't mess around with Balice the bitch. Thanks, Luke, for keeping our Eve in our minds and hearts. This story is quite intriguing and has me wondering what the hell will happen next. Villanelle will wipe the floor with these people because no one around can match her cunning intellect, skillfulness and savvy. She is a force of nature. This looks like a wild adventure, and I am looking forward as always to your next installment.

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💯 agree with your comment, you took the words right out of my mouth 👏

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Humm, Johnny, the outlier. I don't think he is with the MI bunch regardless of their number. Is he somehow part of the Tiberius plot? We shall see quickly no doubt.

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Ha!

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‘It's Ferragamo.' Only Villanelle would 😂

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Villanelle! Knight in shining armour coming to Balice's (purse's) rescue *wipes tear from eye* methinks Villanelle is doing a fair amount of projecting and likes Balice herself a bit more than she lets on ...

Johnny Fernandez what's your deal hmmm 🤨

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This chapter felt Iike Villanelle. Well done. I love when I can hear her voice in my head while I'm reading

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