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Aug 7Liked by Luke Jennings

Oh and Eve is big mad. "Or up to now," dang!!

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Aug 7Liked by Luke Jennings

Now the title 'Bloodline' starts to make sense. But I've no idea where this will go next.

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Aug 7Liked by Luke Jennings

This story is epic!! WHAT a suprise today..very very clever! C'mon Eve! Tell V how you are feeling or else slap that smug Balice!

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Aug 7Liked by Luke Jennings

Emotional tumult, international intrigue, shocking historical scandal…come on, next Wednesday!

(Villanelle is really going to have to fix this thing with Balice. Understandable why it happened at the time, but now it’s going to keep coming back to bite Eve, and it’s clearly not resolved. Especially in light of how hair-trigger jealous V gets over nothing, Eve sounds like she might snap.)

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Aug 7Liked by Luke Jennings

Shoot! I wanted eve to tell oxana how she feels. Hopefully next week.

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Loved that tiny yet significant moment with Eve, when she felt like showing her affection to Vil but thought about her boundaries instead and put herself first. Attagirl!

Poor Valentine suffering from that terrible decease...so if he messes up with Eve, he has zero chances of survival, you know what I mean 😈

Such emotional turbulence, insecurity, and jealousy in the last two chapters, isn't there?

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the sky is darkening...

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Aug 7Liked by Luke Jennings

Well that just blew the door wide open 🤯💯🔥🎢👏👏👏! Totally get where Eve is coming from the way she is feeling …. That line or up to now anyway- Only right! I actually really like Valentin, he hasn’t had it easy from the start & is carrying a massive weight. This instalment was explosive major revelation , Thank you Luke the master mind , forever keeping us surprised and hanging on to our seats ! 💯🔥❤️🎢 forever grateful to be able to read your amazing stories of Villanelle&Eve and I will go back to counting down the days & hours , driving myself insane lol 😂 I love it ! Agree with the other person’s comment about the title of this story bloodline makes sense …. I’m getting so excited 😆 for what’s to come 👏👏👏

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Aug 7Liked by Luke Jennings

OK, I totally love this! An unknown Romanov! A chef's kiss for you, Luke. (And yes, Villanelle had better get her act together re: Balice. Eve is a force of nature who hasn't quite come into her own yet.)

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Aug 9Liked by Luke Jennings

OMG... things are about to get crazy from here 🫣😰😱

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Another brilliant chapter Luke. It's only chapter 14 and so much left to be revealed. I look forward to the ongoing adventure...but it's nerve wracking sometimes!

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Thank you Ruth!

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A very cunning and innovative twist Luke - I can’t wait to see how this develops…

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Thanks Chris!

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Honestly I really love that Eve said “up for now”, it's about time she started getting pissed with Villanelle! 💪🏻😊but I don't understand why villanelle would “lap up” balice's lust. I mean she tried to kill eve and villanelle is so calm seeing her?😤😤

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Great short story. I was entranced!

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